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Fire Spirit by Allviran Fire Spirit by Allviran
K So I'm not very good at digital art. This is my first time attempting something like this.
I drew the original image by hand and then colored it in paint. The background was done in GIMP and all of the color effects were done in GIMP as well
Total time: 7 hours

I would really like some legit feedback and ways to improve, but I also don't want anyone to be mean and just tell me how much it sucks...
Because I already know that.
I want to know how I can IMPROVE my digital art.

Art by ME
I really like the fact that you have tried and how you have brought the element of fire so well out.

I really can't see that well what your vision was other that Fire, but it doesn't matter.

You could think more into with direction the flames and the hair are going. Because to me they don't look like they belong together. Also the flames on the feet's are not as good as those on the background just like those on the hands, that's something you should consider, cos right now the picture doesn't look like the elements belong together, and that's a shame because, it's really pretty

Also the shades are somehow weird, maybe if you think what places will be lighten by the flames, and maybe make some arrows to another layer with show you the direction of shading.

Also you could think of the fact that flames don't look that good when they come from one and only place, it kinda eats their life away if you know what I mean.

You really do have the technique, but you need to have your thoughts on the whole picture, not only what looks good alone.

This picture really does have some kind of a impact, but it could be better, if the couple things would go together better.

I really like this picture, and I can see the time you've brought on this.
What do you think?
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Allviran Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Two prints have already been purchased of this art :3
HopeHedgehog Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
O3O ooo~ colors~
Allviran Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ indeed
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Submitted on
November 23, 2012
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